Have I ever mentioned that Ana loves to write?
But, yeah…..we need some lesson plans on plot, I think.
(She loves anything to do with art,
too……so if anyone has any tips for organizing art supplies
(
Andrea-feel free to chime in here!), please fill me in!!!
But……daily, I find her masterpieces
(of both art & stories)
left on my bedroom floor,
the kitchen counter…..
the couch-for the babies to tear apart,
the table.
She has lately taken to writing variations on a story called, “The Soup.”
The other day, I counted at least 3 copies of it strewn about the house!
Dave & I were laughing so hard,
as we read each story.
(please tell me other parents just have this overwhelming desire to LAUGH at their kids!
They are just so funny!)
The stories never vary much
(well, unless you count how much MONEY the “carpinter” made-ha!!! haa!!!)
……so my only conclusion is…….
Soon I better come up with lesson plans that focus on PLOT in story writing!
Click on the picture!
See if it doesn’t make you smile!
(& make you realize some things MIGHT be missing from our lesson plans-
you think?)
Edited: This was one of the comments left in the comments section. Made me LAUGH out loud!!! Didn't want anyone to miss it!
***********said...
You're missing the points of tension! They are there, but YOU, big adult that you are, are missing them! The carpinter makes soup, but we don't know until the end of the story whether or not he will get to EAT the soup. Also, when he goes to work, will he be able to make any money? In today's economy, this is an important consideration. Fortunately, our protagonist makes $105 dollars AND gets to eat his soup. A very fortunate man, all things considered. Also, notice how well she handles the soup theme: she mentions it at the beginning of the story, moves away from it, and returns to the soup. This also, incidentally, shows some understanding of plot, since we start with soupness, move away from soupness, and then thankfully are returned to soupness. It's a cohesive, symmetrical, and satisfying denoument. Perhaps you shouldn't criticize your eldest child so much ;D